Your eyes
by crystal Oct 4, 2005
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Every time i see you, i see a smile on your face, but your eyes, they tell a different story, they tell me of the pain, of your longing to be loved, you want someone to trust in, someone to help you through the night, they tell the story of your life, of all the times you\'ve been let down, they tell me of your fear, that things will never change, they tell me of your hope for the future, that somehow things might change, your eyes have told me, everything i need to know, they\'ve let your secrets out, but don\'t worry, you\'re safe with me, i want to be that someone, the one that you can trust in, i want to be the one, to help you through the night, you don\'t have to fake a smile, you don\'t have to pretend anymore |
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18 years ago
by missy
Wow that was amazing!
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19 years ago
Maybe the title should be the eyes of pain since there's so much pain, right?
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19 years ago
by SammiBABY
I'd call it "don't pretend" or "you don't have to pretend anymore" great poem, be proud!!!!
much love,
sammi -
19 years ago
by Atomic
Facade*
Sorry for the mistakes.
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(")-(") Arrivederci! -
19 years ago
by Atomic
"the tell me of the pain, of your longing to be loved"
I think you meant "they"
"the tell the story of your life"
I think you meant "they"
As for titles suggestions:
â—Š Closed Eyes
â—Š Beneath Your Smile
◊ Façade
That's all I have, M'lovely. =)
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(")-(") Arrivederci!
