Drowning In My Blood.

by Ehsi   Oct 4, 2005


Shedding my lonely tears,
Soon Turing into a flood,
Cutting away my fears,
Drowning in my blood,

My eyes are not alone,
My wrist also drown,
Crying crimson tears,
Never to be found,

Oh, razor blade,
Won't you be my friend,
Bleed away my sorrow,
Till the very end,

All alone,
All alone again,
Reaching for my knife,
My one & only friend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I loved it! It was extremely sad but that's what brought out the emotions in it! Very well done! And thank you for your comment on my poem! It meant a lot to me! I look forward to reading more of your poetry...you are a very talented writer!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*~ Broken Green Eyes ~*~

    Hey, I just now read it!! I'v been busy, I moved!! lol anyways that was awesome... I loved it!! it really hit home.. Keep it up hun

    Green Eyes

  • 19 years ago

    by Ehsi

    Thanks sock....& yes, it is me...
    I'm glad you understood it, & liked it.

    thanks anthony

  • 19 years ago

    by sock

    Superb poem!it expresses the person's(yours?) loneliness very well, so lonely that a nonliving cold steel blade has become his/her best friend

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