Invisible me

by yes-i love you   Oct 4, 2005


I see you looking
Straight through me
Invisible me
I see you staring
Straight through me
Invisible me

I hear you talking
Over the top of me
Invisible me
I see you walking
Not with me
Invisible me

I see you with her
Never with me
Invisible me
I wonder if you like her
You wouldnt like me
Invisible me

I wonder if you will ever notice me
Look at me
Invisible me
I hope that one day I might not be invisible
You might notice me
Invisible me

I hate been invisble
You not noticing me
Invisible me
Maybe you should look closer
Take a look at me
Invisible me

Invisible me

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  • 18 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Maybe is my reaction a bit late, but still, good poem.. and very recognizable for me
    and thanx for rating my poem
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by courtney

    Wow that was really good had a nice flow
    ~courtney~

  • 19 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    I "hearts" it!!! Wow ur poems is like how i feel right at the moment i mean im going bak to skul tommorw after hols and not seein me crush for ages and well i no he wont see me!! read mine and give me advice!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by *secrets*

    That is what i call a very touching poem.......i can relate to it soo much! keep with the good work and dont mind the stupid ignorent people who don't bother to leave a comment or a rating or a vote for ur poems coz that one was awesome! why don't you try saying 'hey' to that dude once in a while...i tried and it worked...i mean we're not together but at least we're friends! or get his msn-- maybe it will work..maybe it wont who knows give it a go gf!! my email: french_honeybee@hotmail.com!!

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