This poem is really a good poem because I have been at different schools all the time and no one liked me it either . I too asked the lord and didn't recieve but now i'm just myself and I have alot of friends and I know I can do all things through christ that strenghten me.

Heya. wer in the same poetry club and i dont know if youv looked recently but evryone has been paired up withsome and we have to read each others poems and comment/give advice. i love this poem its great. although in some places it doesnt flow i think its sucha great idea and written brilliantly. keep it up its great!
polly x