Take your life i will not cry,
For soon I know that i will die
Forever with you I shall be,
We will live in harmony

Ok plz dont tell me this is what you're literally thinking
cause I'd miss you and maybe even join you. . .

No emma, this is not what i am literally thinking... deep down, yes, it is strangely how i feel but i wouldn't kill myself. not wiht great friends liek you...
xoxoxo

I no how it feels to be so down, and ive been there myself, but i hope this is not what u plan on doing. the poem was great as usual, but dont give in to that feeling

Ruby

Cool, it's dark, and it carries alot of emotion, i like that

This is a really emotional piece. Dont ever give in. It doesnt sovle things,it just hands them over to someone else. But this piece of writing is really deep.

Kat