~*Awww that was supppa sweet keep up the great work 5++*~ XoXo

Er..I hate when people leave half-as* remarks. ^ Mhm.

Anyways, No offence, but I really didnt like that poem so much. It wasnt that it didnt have emotion, or that it wasnt a certain depth..but theres just something I dislike. Maybe its because the person in the poem (I guess you) rely to much on fate and God. If you think things are going to come to you as life goes on, im sorry to say- but they arent. (Sorry if you think I'm rude.)

-Jennifer.

It would be stupid for me to say i didn't like taht one coz, as i would, i understood every thing you were trying to say. I love you, matt. nice work.

I didnt know you would write anything like that!
Its a nice change from the rape poem
Suzies a lucky girl
But in some cases jennifer is right but sometimes it just happwns like that

No I didnt think I needed god, just a coincidental helping hand.

Some of the lines wern't long enough at times, for me this kinda screwed the rhythm of the poems, oh well