Wow... that was one incredible poem! I've always liked the idea of poetry telling a story : ) definitely a 5/5 from me.. great job
XoxoX
Robin
Ps. Thanks for you comment.. just wondering... you said that my poem actually made sense unliked some of these other poems. When you said some of these other poems, did you mean some of my other poems? You don't need to answer.. but it's good to know things like that.. just to keep it in mind in case I change them or write new ones. Thanks a bunch : )

Hey dis poem is incredible, i really enjoyed it. well done. 5/5. keep up the good work and thanks for de comment on mine, i really appreciate it

Great poem :) keep it up
robyn