That was very good. I love the imagery and the word choice for it was okay because it kinda fit it. The flow was cool too.
~A&C

Thanks for all the comments

Wow i really liked tht poem! not many poems can hold my attention all the way through but that one rili did. well dun. 5/5 jesxx

Hey, that was really good, as i read it i was thinking of who it would be in the coffin and i had no idea it was you.
very good poem, very good twist, i will be sure to see more of your stuff.
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Wow... that was good... slightly predictable... but really good...
comment my work to plz..

kaykay

Wow, that was really good, keep up the great writing!
Helen xxx