That's so good. I love it. I'm sorry you had to go through that.

That was so sad and touching.
wish you and your brother the best,
marjan

Awww i'm so sorry to read this i know exactly how you fell i had cut my wrist to i go through alot but we will be ok i'm hear for you if there is eny thing you want to talk about you can tell me ok
love always barbie

Omg!! y would u wanna kill urself!!! if you love your brother so much you should want to live just for him... i have a brother and if i ever killed myself... he would be depressed then the same cycle would like began... you should be thankful for life, not trying to take it away

That poem is awesome, well done and hang in there, that poem flows really well, i loved it!! at least he is there for support now, good luck xxxx :) keep smiling

It was great.you should keep writing this good stuff.4/5

This is a great poem im going through the same thing

Amazing, and written with great emotion...wonderful job.

Aww sabrina...this is so sad sweetie. Im sorry that I haven't been on lately to read and stuff but Im glad that Im back and that I read this. Good luck with it hun, and Im here for you.

Much Love,
Jordan

I loved ur poem
i am going throught the same thing w. my lil brother
thanks so much for the poem

You really are amazing with words...this made me well up, i can relate...beautiful beautiful poem, still here for u xxx

Thats so full of emotion, I could feel it was coming straight from your heart, simply raw feeling poured on to a page.. made me feel tearful and sad, your brother realises what an amazing person you are, you obviously mean a lot to him and he to you, I hope you can get better with time, trying different ways to cope with self confidence and low self esteem, there are a lot of good programmes which can really help you find some confidence, I would reccomend you go to some as I would love to see you get better, best wishes for the future, I hope things can be alright, remember you are beautiful as you are, you have a good talent in writing, thats another good point, you are a lovely person with a pure and kind heart, I hope in time you will see that, take care
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Great poem!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great work 5/5

Very sad, I almost cried. I wont say i know wat its like but i can say i know wat possion ur bro is in, my sis tried the same thing, and i didnt know what to do when i found out, although i didnt c her for years after i found out cus she wrote it in a note wen she ran away. Shes still gone.

I did the same thing to my brother and i em a boy who broke my family hart so i no how it feels you aint alone

I loved your poem, but I thought you should know that someone has copied it and is using it as their own. Check it out.

www.zenhex.com/poets.php?poet=122844

Shattered Tears

Beautiful poem..
full of emotion
its such a sincere poem... so tough to gulp..
i can see how much u care for him
your a lovely person
dont lose it
love
amy

Awww, that is such a great poem!!! omg, wow!

"I never wanted to let you down
never wanted you to know my pain
I tried to keep it all inside
but the secrets made me go insane"

That was my favorite stanza :D I really liked the rhyme scheme in this poem. And the EMOTION... WOW. You got a way with words, hun! Keep it up!
Love always,
~BJ~

Oh sorry i didn't read this one - i have been so sad recently. I have wrote another poem just now. I am grateful i have you to turn to - thanks hun. This poem is so sad but amazingly written. :)

Gosh! i cried agen your poems are so powerful and filled with such emotion, your truley a gifted writer!