I like this poem short, but nice. Flows well, makes sense. Good job. =D

Yes, it had a nice flow but it would sound better if you "cleaned it up" such as better language, and clearer intentions. Of course, all writing is just a sense of style, and it is not necessarily a mistake.

Good Writing!
beth

Good poem but i know you can do better

It was vert emotional. If the story is true, then that's very sad to hear. She may need help with her life. I liked the poem, Good stuff.

Wow, powerful and emotional poem. The shortness of it adds to it's impact. Good work, take care.

This is an awesome poem. there's so much emotion, i really like it!! 5/5!!

*Shawte*