by TeArS R FaLLiNg Oct 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I think i have to give up |
by kirsty
Gr8 poem thankxxx 4 commenting on mine. xxxx keep up the brill writing |
I loved that, i really did. It was like the short lines were showing how trapped and numb everything feels. That made me want to cry, wicked poem, really well written xx |
Awesome!!! i can relate, i used to feel that way. but don't give up, things will get better. maybe not right away, but they will get better. take care and stay strong. |
by skyfox
WHAT total brilliance!!!!!!!! The emotion, the confusion the helplessnessIt just leaps off the page. You have nailed how so many of us feel. I truly believe there is a way past this for us all. You do have an amazing gift with words. |
by Pure Silence
Great subject, wonderfully put darlin!...keep hope.. |