Wow you are good with your words they fit soo good together, but I am feeling the way this poem is describing.
I like it ALOT 5/5

Woah, I really liked that, so emotional. love the ending, another great poem, hope your alright xxx

Omg. this poem is amazing. and not just that...i completely relate to it. like i dont belong in this world anymore...but plz dont give up hope. dont giv up the fight. you can make it. we can both make it through. i'm always here if you need me. and thx 4 commenting on my poem! lyl~lex

No no no...you're not doing this!! You just said to me that i've got to be strong...hun please don't go. i know how you feel about being so trapped etc...but i just sow ant you to get through this. I'm always here if you ever need ok?! if u have msn add strawbs1@hotmail.com...hope to hear from you soon!!
great poem btw 5/5 xoxoxox

You know, i do not know who i am either and why i am like this...but i stop trying to figure it out and just be what i am right now...but of course be a better person...

luv ya...darling...and this poems has so strong feelings in it...hey and i just got my email address it's jane_fairies@hotmail.com, email me okey...oh maybe i'll email you...tell me what's happening...i will like to know...okey...stay strong...don't give up on life...or yourself...

Great subject, wonderfully put darlin!...keep hope..

Thanks for the comments your wonderfully talented gurl!

Love Always
Jenn x0x0x

WHAT total brilliance!!!!!!!! The emotion, the confusion the helplessnessIt just leaps off the page. You have nailed how so many of us feel. I truly believe there is a way past this for us all. You do have an amazing gift with words.

Awesome!!! i can relate, i used to feel that way. but don't give up, things will get better. maybe not right away, but they will get better. take care and stay strong.
-xXx-
P.S. thanks for the comments, they mean so much :D

I loved that, i really did. It was like the short lines were showing how trapped and numb everything feels. That made me want to cry, wicked poem, really well written xx

Gr8 poem thankxxx 4 commenting on mine. xxxx keep up the brill writing