You Think You Know Me

by Soft Rain   Oct 4, 2005


You think you know me
but you really don't
because you haven't seen
the things Ive been through.

Ive lived in poverty
seen many storms
tore my house down
tore my soul.

Ive seen many deaths
and many cry
but beneath it all
I'm still going strong.

If you only knew
how hard it has been
to keep my chin up
and myself on my feet.

Now tell me.....
Do you think you know me?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Tore...I think you mean tear....That was a lot better than your first one though. I loved how you ended it. You can still work on this one but I do like it. There's some cool lines in it.
    ~A&C

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Well done! great improvements in your writing already!! not to many repeated words so it didn't ruin the flow the lines were about the same langth, great improvements! well done! i'm going to try and find time to email you someting tonight. just so you know

    ~Jacklyn

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