Digging My Own Grave

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Oct 4, 2005


From the depth of myself, I've lost touch with reality.
Prisoner of words unsaid, I locked my feelings away.
Bottled up inside, the anger rages within, helpless.
Bottled up inside, the sadness rains upon me.

Chained by the memories of my past, my painful reality.
Haunted by the scenes I tried so hard to forget.
Haunted by the tears I've cried for so many years.
Covering the truth, masking my true identity.

Happy on the outside, enveloped in my lies.
Dying on the inside, sadness washes away my hope.
My silent screams unheard, suffocating me.
Chained by memories of the past, my painful reality.

Bleeding my feelings away, ink begins to fade.
Escaping my truth, hidden deep down under the surface.
Escaping my past, running from what was real.
Silent cries echo in the night, distant memory.

Buried, my identity forever hidden from their eyes.
Buried, my feelings kept on paper, covered by lies.
Deep within the surface, I dug my own grave.

*i have no idea how i came up with this... but wtv. hope you enjoyed :D

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  • 19 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    This was just awesome again!!! love your writing i think i can relate to the words..hope youre okay take care xx
    x

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    After reading your work, it is obvious you have a real skill at this. this poem is no exeption. this is amazing stuff! i think you have a lot of stuff to get out!! well done for another fine bit of work!

    also, i apresiaited your comment.
    as a rookie it means alot to know people are reading my stuff.

    Ruby

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hello! :)

    I enjoyed this very much, m'dear. This was my favorite stanza:

    "Happy on the outside, enveloped in my lies.
    Dying on the inside, sadness washes away my hope.
    My silent screams unheard, suffocating me.
    Chained by memories of the past, my painful reality."

    That first line was especially effective. You become so immersed in your own lies that you wonder if what even you say is true. If that made any sense at all. :P

    Take care, and remain the fighter you are.

    //Ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Really nice poem, well written. I loved the ideas behind it and it flowed and read really well.
    Thanks for your comment !!

    XxX Cici XxX

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awesome Hun,
    A little freaky concept wise but brill either way, as usual every thing was ace

    Thankyou for you comments they mean a lot to me,

    Love Always
    Jenn

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