Awesome Hun,
A little freaky concept wise but brill either way, as usual every thing was ace

Thankyou for you comments they mean a lot to me,

Love Always
Jenn

Really nice poem, well written. I loved the ideas behind it and it flowed and read really well.
Thanks for your comment !!

XxX Cici XxX

Hello! :)

I enjoyed this very much, m'dear. This was my favorite stanza:

"Happy on the outside, enveloped in my lies.
Dying on the inside, sadness washes away my hope.
My silent screams unheard, suffocating me.
Chained by memories of the past, my painful reality."

That first line was especially effective. You become so immersed in your own lies that you wonder if what even you say is true. If that made any sense at all. :P

Take care, and remain the fighter you are.

//Ari\\

After reading your work, it is obvious you have a real skill at this. this poem is no exeption. this is amazing stuff! i think you have a lot of stuff to get out!! well done for another fine bit of work!

also, i apresiaited your comment.
as a rookie it means alot to know people are reading my stuff.

Ruby

This was just awesome again!!! love your writing i think i can relate to the words..hope youre okay take care xx
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