Reckless Emotion

by Falling Up   Oct 5, 2005


At the edge with no grasp,
Its inevitable Ill fall
Deeper emotionally,
Then ever thought at all.

Ive crashed into my thoughts, defenseless against pain I cannot prevent.
You're killing me softly
With feelings that Ive always meant

I have a reckless emotion
But you intimidate my actions
A captivating feeling,
Nothing, but mere distractions.

My voice is broken,
As words seem impossible to say,
Your enticing glances
Are what makes a better day.

It isnt just your stare,
Nor the thought of what love could be,
But the feelings that you make me feel,
Right here right now,
Its just you, being here with me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Sweet ^_^

    I love this part especially...

    "My voice is broken,
    As words seem impossible to say,
    Your enticing glances
    Are what makes a better day."

    I admire your talent, m'dear.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I rly enjoyed this poem hunn! LISSA xox

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    ...um...sorry but i really didnt understand this much....4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    I loved it. i can totally relate.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I like it, I truly do. If I may make two suggestions however. The first line of your second stanza is too long to keep the flow, could just be a formatting problem, but it's worth a look. And your final stanza has one more line than the others. I love your word usage though, particularly the last two lines of the fourth stanze. Brilliantly done.

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