Very well done. And I think reckless is spelled with a "w"-wreckless. ;-)

Very nicely written --- I love it

Hehe, I was just kidding. Come chekc out your new stuff? This is your new stuff!

This is really great! I'm quite envious! Umm, I should probably tell you that I've never been in love with a girl seeing as...I am one. It's okay, I guess "Squeeks" isn't feminine enough or something! Anyways, great job! 5/5!

This is a wonderful poem..I can realte to it and it was easy to follow. love it. thanks for the comment. 5/5

I really like this poem. I absolutely heart the emotions put into this poem. The flow was flawless.

"Your enticing glances
Are what makes a better day. "

That was the best part of the poem. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I really liked this.. the subject written upon is easily cliche, but yours was good..im prolly overly critical but o well.. take what u can from my advice.. i liked the beginning for the most part.. pretty good stanza.. next one

You're killing me softly

thats pretty cliche, though it captures the essence of the idea.. but its always better to be original in descriptions and such.. makes it more enjoyable to read.. other than this, i really enjoyed this stanzas.. specially the last line's flow/rhyme..

I have a reckless emotion
But you intimidate my actions

seems a bit awkward, sort of forced.. just my opinion.. but "intimidating your actions" is hard for me to envision..

A captivating feeling,
Nothing, but mere distractions.

i think this particular line is misleading.. i think you're meaning to say everything else but the feeling(?) is but a mere distraction, which is contrary to what you wrote.. im being pretty nitpicky just because i always enjopy suggestions/ideas on my poems, whether i use them or not.. good rhyme and a pretty decent flow was maintained other than what i mentioned.. good read,.. 4/5.. keep writing.. pZ =o)

Ahh your jealou!? im jealous, this is wonderful you use a great vocab your flow is pretty dan perfect and you almost rhymed prefectly as well. the only advice i can give for this poem is to make the message a bit more clear. unless im completly stupis it just seemed like this poem was about something bad like the word choice you chose to use like reckless and defenseless and crash just seem like sad and mean words so they it's kinda weird the poem has this whole evil vibe about it but then it's about being in love....but i love this if i love your next one your going on my favorites! im glad you commented on my poem so that i had this chance to look at your stuff

This poem is nice !!

My voice is broken,
As words seem impossible to say,

these lines are so beautifull..
im so touched...
guess i'll add you to my favs & keep checking more of your poems : )
love
amy

I liked the poem, but what i didnt like was one of your lines contained the title of another poem of yours. it takes away from the feel and emotion to add a title of another poem.

This was wonderful. I really made me think. Love is oh so complicated. Thank you for the comment.

Love always,
Your Broken hearted perfection

Great job at describing this emotion.
Some things~ 2nd stanza 2nd line seems a bit long, try getting rid of the "I'm"

Well, I couldn't quite grasp the story behind it, but it had nice feeling and some of the words were very beautiful, and smart-sounding, and had a good rhyme, but you could perhaps clear up the whole topic, like what is the person actually talking about? But I think that you should definitely send it in to a competition, because we all have to give life a chance, and when we get the opportunity to get what we truly want, then we should all dare to take it.
Anyway, just my thoughts. Take care.

Good Writing!
beth

I like it, I truly do. If I may make two suggestions however. The first line of your second stanza is too long to keep the flow, could just be a formatting problem, but it's worth a look. And your final stanza has one more line than the others. I love your word usage though, particularly the last two lines of the fourth stanze. Brilliantly done.

I loved it. i can totally relate.

...um...sorry but i really didnt understand this much....4/5

I rly enjoyed this poem hunn! LISSA xox

Sweet ^_^

I love this part especially...

"My voice is broken,
As words seem impossible to say,
Your enticing glances
Are what makes a better day."

I admire your talent, m'dear.

xxx