That poem is soo sweet and sad.. so much meaning... i love it! the only thing i have to say is that you rhymed almost your entire poem, exept the first stanza, doesnt ryme.. so just thought id tell you.... criticizm will make your poems better each time! so please comment on my poems too!

*tear* i love it. I can relate to it and connect so easily. If i could see you I would hug you, its incredible. short and sweet and all the more memorable. well done.

What a beautiful poem of the ultimate love and devotion.If we could all but find this type of love, the soulmate of our dreams, then nothing else would matter.This really touched me to the core of my heart.Excellent construction and made even stronger with the sincerity and meaning of the words and especially the emotion that just seems to radiate with such power of a loving heart.