Omg i luv ur poem..its soooooo nice but sad...u have talent..mayb u can reada sum of my poems sumtime..

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dina

Good poem but i think you tried to rhyme too hard..... other than that it was good!!! Keep it up!!

Marie

Thats really well written, I adore it! I really get where your coming from!

Hey, i loved the rhyming pattern in this poem, it's different to most poems where the rhymes are in every two sentances.

Anywayz, i really liked it, well done !!!

XxX Cici XxX

Wow....god i like this poem lol its like one of my favorites...5/5 for sure
Becky
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A little rhymey.. but its very well written

Awwww this is sooo sad but i understand u thoe...i love the style that u write in...so beautiful and touching...take care and never give up...kisses...5/5

Okay i liked this one alot you broke your whole scheme the second to last stanza for no apparent reason there are lots of words your could have rhymed with sense but okay....so 4/5 i liked this

Amazing job. I really liked this poem alot. Very talented. keep it up. keep on writing.

Excellent descriptions. Keep it up

The over all poem was good but to me it seem to be forced wth rhyme, and that take away from the poem in my eyes. but it was still an amzing poem and you get a 5

Nice job.. liked reading this one. 5/5! it had a nice flow and rhyme scheme but two of the rhymes were "weak" or so to speak but nice job 4/5

Lol didnt mean to confuse you i hit the wrong button it 5/5! lol

Another amazing poem. keep writing.

Awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful and alsooo veryyyyyyy sad...5/5