by Lonely Heart .ღ. Oct 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sitting alone with my razor blade |
by Leona
This is a great poem love your style of work |
by Ariana
This is interesting, I like your choice of words, like 'rip' it really makes the poem more effective and realistic. |
Did that really happen? Very real picture in my minds eye when I read that one |
by Dave
Really powerfull poem ya have done here i rweally enjoyed you playing with words my only semi-negitive thing i would have to say is that i have read thru it a few times now and it sort of has a problem with the flow mid way thru still great poem |
by Jamie
Well i loved it...honest...this was great this is one cutting poem ill remember |