I like how you have chosen to be different by writing about a male getting abused by the female.

It's nice to see changes. =)

Though the guy did lose his manliness for not really fighting back, but iys still a great poem.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I like how dark it is... which would prob. be why you put it under dark huh???? Duh. anyway i love it you did a great job writing it keep it up!!!

Marie

Wonderful idea...i love how different it is you dont read many story's about this topic of the guy and girl positions 5/5

Nice. Really dark !! My personal favourite type of poem !!!
I like the ideas behind this, it works well. 5/5 !

XxX Cici XxX

Wow...wow...lol thats all i have to say..its kinda SCARY! lol 5/5 loved it
Becky
xoxo

Wow.... extremly dark poem. loved it... i'd love to do that... but not to the guy i like, but to his girlfriend >:) hehe.... i'm evil. anyways, awesome poem. you should write more like this.

p.s- you should have the word Shadow in your title, since you reffered to it frequently. or Night

Wow...this is kinda similar to chuckie...lolz...all bloody and stuff...i really liked it...u r in my favz...keep it up 5/5

Sweet poem. You have an awsome style of writing and I enjoy reading your poetry. Welcome to my favorites! :)

Again, another nice poem.
I like dark poems as you've probably noticed.. lol... so yeah this is probably one of my favourite ones of yours.
I like the title by the way...

xxx cici xxx

(Thanks for ALL your comments, i appreciate them !!)