by Steven Beesley Oct 5, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Autumn so serene: |
by HansRik
This is a truly fantastic piece of work, Steven. The poem flows with ease, and you succeed in recreating nature's beauty in words. Well done! The imagery is efficient, and the diction is excellent. Great poem! |
by JJ
Come on! why does everybody love the autumn season? you're making me love it now...when I used to hate it. :) Can't you write a poem about winter? seriously who has fun raking leaves?? I don't. |
by Angie
Oh I so love Autumn, all the smells and sounds with two wonderful holidays too, Halloween and Thanksgiving. Beautiful write, brings back many memories of my childhood. |
by Ann Stareyes
Steven |
by katie!
This is simply beautiful, I too love the autumn, and you portrayed its beauty and wonder magnificently, I felt so captured by your poem, the descriptions made me think of going to the park with my family in the autumn, with all the red leaves and the conkers falling, and the squirrels running round, really wonderful piece of writing, I hope I can write a nature piece like this one day |