Just So You Know *to justin*

by Torn   Oct 5, 2005


I shut you out,
Too scared to let you in.
But now you've broken me to bits,
Like i was another little sin.

I told myself it was OK,
So i let that pain go.
And wished for better luck,
My insecurities i didn't show.

But just as trust had settled,
You said there was nothing more,
Like i was bread you said we were stale,
And you fled to higher shore.

It's not the fact that I've lost you,
Or even that we wont 'be'.
It's more that you don't seem to care,
You want nothing to do with me.

I still want your friendship,
That's why there's so much pain.
I know you wont talk to me,
It's like this little game.

Maybe it's just me,
I seem to have this affect.
Whenever i get slightly close,
I'm left with a feeling of neglect.

But just so you know,
I'm waiting for you everyday.
If only we could just be friends,
So please don't just walk away.

*about Justin...I'm over him but i just wish we would talk...
please comment!!
xoxo

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Huni! i luv this poem! its s0o g0od! what happened here? what did y0o or he do?? weLL i wiLL talk 2 y0o s0on! i luv y0o!! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    I know you how you feel the same thing happend with one of my friends. great poem keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Great work. Thanks for commenting on my poem. ^_^ Boy trouble? I have two best friends who always come to me for advice about them. And the funny thing is, I don't even date or try to get to many male friends. All the ones at my old school were idiots!! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Ha, yes yes yes yes yes. This poem is perfect and exactly how I feel about my ex. He has a new girl and I am basically over him but he just left and I . . . I still want to talk to him because he just left and he didn't say goodbye and he . . . he just left and then got a new girl and yeah. I just think this is a good poem and I really easily to relate to. Nice job as always!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Omg
    i'll cry everytime i read this poem
    u know what youre way bettewr off than me
    this girl rejected me...i likd her oh so much
    read my poem n u'll come to know...
    but yet.;.i was like okay fine...then she wanted to be friends n i was reely happy...
    then i mssged her the next nite
    and after some time she told me...
    im busy
    i thot okay fine
    then she tells me...."im not busy. im just not interested in talking to you."
    THUD. HEARTBREAK
    but i got over THAT too...
    then she tells my best friend in school...i hope he doesnt go n tell everyone abt this,....it is SO EMBARRASSING FOR ME!!!
    wtf is this supposed to mean...
    i dunno
    i wanna end life...
    tired of it all....

    but great poem...
    dhaval

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