This is really cool, especially how you introduce the image of a skeleton into it. It seems kindof like a song, but that's cool too. This is a great read, 5/5

Wow, what a great poem!! wonderful choice of words, very powerful.keep up the great work:)xxx

Ooh so dark and descriptive! using that one stanza twice was a good way to set things in motion a little more. I like!

Outstanding poem. I could never match that. I love how it flows perfectly from one line to the next. Keep'em coming.

Very powerful, Great Dark poem. Excellent vocab

~The wings carve my back into this dreadful sight,
Preying on the weak in the darkness of night

*very strong and appealing

Wow amazing format and an excellent dark poem

Such rythmic finesse!

This poem explored vulnerability and lonliness.

Babe this is awsum like ususal
hey we're in ita 2getha. woo!! like atm aswell hehe
well catchya l8z
amy

Wow ! lovely poem
colour like death as dark as black...
nice line !!
nice poem
5/5
i'll read more of ur poems soon
thanks for ur comment
do read "murder or suicide"
is one of my fav poem...
thanks a ton
love
amy

You picked the right topic for this . It is beyond dark . In the begining I thought it was going to be another one of those cut poems that I've been reading so many of . But you proved me wrong . This poem is truly deep, it leaves the reader wondering and makes them have to go read it all over again . Well at least thats what I did . You are an exceptional artist, you're brilliant . I might not be as wise about poetry as most poets are, but I know poetry because thats who I am . So now you see why you recieved so many. " I'm speechless ." comments, or one worded comments . Because thats what you do, you leave us speechless . I mean you almost left me speechless, and I tell you thats very, very, rare . So keep up the good work . I'm placing you in my favorites so that I can keep up with you .

you're friend

Letty

Wow!! Really cool poem! Damn! Keep up the good work!