River of Our Love

Wonderfully done, a most exquisite pen Bill, lovely, lovely, kudos!!!

I think the repetition of some words - like 'eternal' for example actually detract from the impact, but overall I liked the rhythm and flow of this. Nice piece.

Breathtaking........... its the only word I can use to describe this masterpiece.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Bill, this was truly beautiful, they are so lucky to have you, and it really showed how much you appreciate them, you used some beautiful words, this really was a picturesque love poem, every word seemed just right for where it was, and it emanated passion, loyalty, devotion and of course love, I read it out loud to myself and I have to say it sounded even better, well done on a wonderful write..
"Our love flows like the river of life
Washing our past to the ethereal sea
Our heartfelt union of husband and wife
Eternal love of you and me"

I really loved this stanza, not only was it my favourite due to its brilliant flow and description but you also used another of my favourite words

"ethereal"
I love that word, well done to you once again...
take care
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