Soul breaker

by katie!   Oct 5, 2005


Mine heart is frozen, locked within a cage of gold
Thou hath mine life, thou hast stolen mine soul
Executing my energies, entrancing my smiles
Till mine happiness fades with thine hands on mine soul

Falling because if thee, and the sins upon mine body
Butchering every worthy cause I built mine self up to
Within a crystal misery lies mine shadowed teardrop
Victorious hunger reigns herein from mine anger to you

Violation of mine rights, mine life caught upon a breeze
Shattering each precious day with mystical precision
Walking upon hot coals to have thine wrath brought down
Entering my soul without mine knowledge, nor permission

Oh fluttering heart, be still, be at peace
Thou hath given me naught but agonies and fear
I cast thee to the shadows, reasoning with doubt
Mine life is tarnished, with mine wanton tears

Resurrection seems distant locked in thine power
An ever-fixed tragedy enveloping mine thoughts
For thine hands hath broken me, to but a bitter child
Wherein I am but nothing, for mine conscience is fraught

**this is based on an issue that happened to me, placed into a poetic form so as to lessen my sadness on the matter**

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  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    That is so emotional, yet amazing. Strong words, and I love the language usage there. I love all of your work, and if you ever want me to read some poems just let me know ;) I enjoy it. 5/5 Yet again

    Saiya

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Emotional and powerful write Katie, stay strong sweetie....... remember, I'm here if you need me.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    I really love ur way with words it outstanding how you put everything into perspective and still manage to do it in poetic form its great well done! xox rc

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Awww i hope things go better, and poetry is such a great way to let feelings and emotions out! i hope it helped relieve what you were feeling and your problems. i really hope things get better you deserve the best of things. great poem though!! 5/5

    ~Jacklyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Powerful and dramatic. Excellent command of the language to convey emotion. Best wishes in all that you do.