Aaaaaw.... Thats sweet! Very nice job!5/5

This was alright there was a lot of unoriginal rhymings but the best part was:
Looking at all the pictures of our past,
Its hard to believe how it shattered like glass.
....that wasnt too bad the worst part was around and ground....other then they rhyming it was good 4/5

This is good i can relate to this at the moment

Because there's no longer you to help me off the ground,
Theres no longer you to just be around.

that was my fav it was great i love how you made him just being around seem like it was all you needed i really liked the emotion this poem gave off great job 5/5

Aw! thats so sad. 5/5

So sweet i loved it 5/5

HEY HUNNY! WASUP GRL? wELL i HOPE THAT POEM IS NOT FOR aDAM! iT SOUNDS VERY SAD. ! WELL GRL CALL ME OR WRITE ME PLZ DO SOMTIN i DUN WANA SPLIT UP AGAIN i KNO UR BUSY BUT PLZ TLK TO ME HUN. lOVE U MUCH SIS! bYE! -nICK

Hey britney...........a great poem and it totally described what i'm going thru right now. It was interesting and well put together.go gal!!!
luv jess xoxoxox

A great realization. i liked how it flowed ina fast paced ending. great job.

Cute! very nice flow, it was shorter but u brought it to its point nicley. 5/5
thanks for r/c on my poem!

This is soooo beautiful and i really enjoy it great job with the rhyming. its just what i feel and i think that u are truly in love and i love seeing ppl being in love...keep it up...5/5

Beautiful Lines! Great job, nice words. 5/5