by Britney Oct 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Walking down the beach hand in hand, |
Thats so sweet! It reminds me of a trip to the beach w my ex,,,,,,sighs |
This an amazing poem, I love the ocean, and you describe it so well. |
I love the emotion you have in this poem...its sooo fresh...i c that u write a lot of love poems just like me...which means that u never fall out of love...keep up the great work and we'll hopefully keep in touch...5/5 |
by aaron c s
That was a beautiful poem. i loved every word. so many adjectives made this a truly great poem. |
Another wonderful poem britney............made me remember my ex...lol. it was amazing to read!! |