Wonderfuly written poem, I love how its short flowing and it even rhymes. Great job. ^^

Thanks for your comment on my poem. Means the world to me.

This one was really good! Almost felt like I wanted to be on a beach somewhere!5/5

I love the beach, and you described it beautifully. the flow is short, but it sounds great.
the ending is, in my opinion perfect.
great job.
mwahh aylz

And that long walk on the beach they will always remember,
Even in the lonely cool months of December.
that was the best part....i didnt like how you rhymed night w/ light

You like switched from talking about yourself to someone else...i dont think you meant to but who knows

Walking and gazing amongst the dark blue ocean,
Theres a cool ocean breeze that makes its own love potion.

that was my favorite stanza it was really good

5/5 great job

"Walking hand in hand and feeling so free,
The sky's a beautiful sight, for all to see."

Awesome i freaking love this poem 5/5

Another wonderful poem britney............made me remember my ex...lol. it was amazing to read!!
luv jess xoxoxox

That was a beautiful poem. i loved every word. so many adjectives made this a truly great poem.

I love the emotion you have in this poem...its sooo fresh...i c that u write a lot of love poems just like me...which means that u never fall out of love...keep up the great work and we'll hopefully keep in touch...5/5

This an amazing poem, I love the ocean, and you describe it so well.

Thats so sweet! It reminds me of a trip to the beach w my ex,,,,,,sighs
5/5