This poem is excellent, keep writing!!!

Awwwwwwwwww i love the last part sooo cut soo sweet if i didnt know u id swear u were gay lol u say wht everygirl loves to hear awww great job soo 5/5 ~beckey~

I really like this one you are a very good poet keep up the good work.
5/5 good job.
Struggling XOXO