Coloring Eternity

This poem is lovely. The imagery stands out amazingly well, and it is very beautifully written. Every stanza had it's own powerful meaning, and that makes this poem brilliant. Great work!

This was interesting and I thought the words used here were something different and quiet complex, you've used words that are really descriptive and unusual. My favourite stanza was the last I loved the words used - diversity, creativity, eternity. Putting them all together definately adds more meaning to this poem and it's also a nice, final way to end it. I was also impressed with how you keep to the same theme throughout (colours) without sounding repetitive or over-using the words. I liked this alot :)))

Its lovly the way you write the poem and what everyone has writen is really true, great poem and god bless, xxxx

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Beautiful job! What more can I say...you have a very creative imagination. This is my favorite stanza:

A beauty running freely
joined by other colts and mares
All different shades running together
blending smoothly in one picture

You really outdid yourself...never in a million years would I come up with anything as creative as this. Keep up the good work and never stop writing.