Creative and well put. I've never seen something written in such a way - A way i understand :D

Take care my bestest best friend
Love always,
- Kalah.

This is so well written. It's creative and beautifully conveyed.
Having said that.....
In the 3rd stanza, 2nd line, I think you mean "petals" as in a flower. It's misspelled.
Also, there's a typo in the 6th stanza, 4th line. It should be bleed not bled.
Other than that, it's brilliant! Keep it up~Holly

Oh and isn't it awesome how many more people are participating in the TOW? And it's only the 2nd day! It was a good idea, and I want to thank you for helping to make it happen!

Beautiful job! What more can I say...you have a very creative imagination. This is my favorite stanza:

A beauty running freely
joined by other colts and mares
All different shades running together
blending smoothly in one picture

You really outdid yourself...never in a million years would I come up with anything as creative as this. Keep up the good work and never stop writing.

Cool.

Its lovly the way you write the poem and what everyone has writen is really true, great poem and god bless, xxxx

This was interesting and I thought the words used here were something different and quiet complex, you've used words that are really descriptive and unusual. My favourite stanza was the last I loved the words used - diversity, creativity, eternity. Putting them all together definately adds more meaning to this poem and it's also a nice, final way to end it. I was also impressed with how you keep to the same theme throughout (colours) without sounding repetitive or over-using the words. I liked this alot :)))

This poem is lovely. The imagery stands out amazingly well, and it is very beautifully written. Every stanza had it's own powerful meaning, and that makes this poem brilliant. Great work!