Hey i love your poem and the edge it has, and you should definitely keep up the work... i think its good and it sounds sorta finished.. but if u wanna write more to it, then maybe write about how its over or whatever, but forever youll love her, because your first true love never really dies, or somthing... well please read my poems and comment too! id love to hear what u have to say.. i just finished a new one called Reckless Emotion

I don't know what to tell you. The poem sounds good the way it is. If you want advice on what to do in your life from here, no one can really tell you. It sucks, people especially guys like to throw around the love word without realizing the strong implications it brings. All I can say is put the past behind you and learn what you can from it.

Poem is gr8, read other comments about how its not finished but sounds it, it seems fine to me the way it is, its good, you always put a lot of feeling in your poems, it's the best way to write, keep it up.x

Yo did good babe :) We haven't spok to eachother in so long and I doubt that maybe you'll notice this for a long time... But you always have my email right? I have urs. I've come a long way with my lyrics and I can see you've become a great writer too. Something else that interests me is the fact that your writing a novel... I've got my own ideas for that and may write 3. Anyways GREAT poem and I can relate somehow but from the antagonist point of view... :( ciao.