Comments : I'm Lost Again

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Another good one.5/5 I like the scheme. I added you to my favorites.
    love
    JP

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You haven't died...see...poem really save you(it's in one of my poems...Poetry...lol)...and I love this one too...especially the first and second line...it's so unique...lol...the whole piece is...

  • 19 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I love the poem. I know how you feel. Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I dont really know how i got this out of this but this poems message to me was kinda "at one point in my life your were my motavation to live, now your the reason i don't wanna wake up in the morning" i probably got that from this part which was my favorite

    -My heart has broken, a time to many,
    I would trade my life for a penny.
    You used to be the one, who kept me alive,
    But without you my life has taken a nosedive.
    How could you do this to me, you've left me alone,

    good job 5/5