Mhm, this was a good poem. I didn't really like the ending though: |
by Marcus
I like that, I felt heart with these words |
Hey this is really good...great job..keep up the wonderful writing... |
by Matt
Awww thank you guys for the comments... I said thank you for the times shes given me. I couldnt think of any other way to end it. and yes its based on a real story |
by Marjan
Wow, I loved the way you wrote it. |