Comments : Goodbye

  • 19 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Mhm, this was a good poem. I didn't really like the ending though:

    To say goodbye, I'm going to say, Thank you.

    Why would you see thank you if she was leaving? For the good times she has givin you? ..Well, good either way I guess.

    -Love Always, Jennifer.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcus

    I like that, I felt heart with these words

  • 19 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    Hey this is really good...great job..keep up the wonderful writing...
    ~SIERRA~

  • 19 years ago

    by Matt

    Awww thank you guys for the comments... I said thank you for the times shes given me. I couldnt think of any other way to end it. and yes its based on a real story

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow, I loved the way you wrote it.
    well done Matt.
    best wishes,
    marjan