by ghozt Oct 5, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Day by day,alone,i walk to my grave,day by day ,alone, with my head down low,but has long has im still a live i will rise to the top and never drop. |
Ur poems r ok but no offense i think they could use a little bit more work...not saying that ur a bad writer of cousrecuz idrk ive only read 2 of ur poems..but just letting u no my opinion...i know mine arent the best...but u get wat im sayin...right?... |