Aww hun, this is a beautiful poem, very well written, i could really feel the emotion coming out of the poem, very expressive too, you have some great talent hun keep it up cant wait to read more, lubb you

Good. I could feel a lot of emotion, strong, sincere emotion in this poem. I know what message and meaning you were trying to put across in the poem but the repetitive style makes it seem like a nursery rhyme, and I know this wasn’t the idea. Also, in the first stanza you have a couple of spelling mistakes. Overall though it was good. Thanks for sharing.

It`s a very good poem and it`s good written, but I think maybe you got a little too much aside. Still it`s a very good and strong poem and I very much liked it