Your Girl

by alicia   Oct 6, 2005


Everytime I turn around
Your already looking
my way
You don't seem to smile
at me
so I put my head down
as I walk away.

I see you waiting in the
hallway
and its like your stairing
at me
as I pass by.
I just want to say
hi
but I'm just to shy
I know I can try.

I know you look deep
into my eyes
You don't have to lie. I know you feel me.

I think about how I would
treat you,
How your girl should treat you,
it should be me.
Giving you the time with me, and that you need.
Spending time alone,
Little less on the phone.
Seeing you over at the
football game.
Is that Lame ?
I just want to be right by your side.
Don't chu feel the same way ?

I would forever be yours truly,
YOUR GIRL

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  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Great emtion!!! i loved every stanza!! =o]

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a g0od j0b very well written i th0ught. fr0m the heart. keep it up xx
    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 19 years ago

    by AsuraXMidnyteSun

    This poem is very different from others that i have seen. definatly very original. i also enjoyed the format in the first stanza.

    it wasn't bad but i'm sure that you could do much better. i gave a 4/5. try to lay off the shortcuts, it looks cute yes, but not always taken seriously.

    please vote on my best poem, it was for a girl i liked...

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=464062

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