This poem is very different from others that i have seen. definatly very original. i also enjoyed the format in the first stanza.

it wasn't bad but i'm sure that you could do much better. i gave a 4/5. try to lay off the shortcuts, it looks cute yes, but not always taken seriously.

please vote on my best poem, it was for a girl i liked...

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=464062

Hey darl a g0od j0b very well written i th0ught. fr0m the heart. keep it up xx
l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Great emtion!!! i loved every stanza!! =o]