It was a...little dark, but I suppose love "kills you" sometimes. Nice poem anyway!

Good Writing!
beth.

Beautiful words indeed Sir, might do with a little formatting....combining lines etc... But I like your style with words.

That was really good....it is from the heart-- i can tell... keep writing..

Love,
Ipsita

Wow sum1 is romantic...lol...again i say 5/5...i wun b suprised if ur famous sumday 4 ur poetry!
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