Wow? really that wasn't wat i expected, but it left me breathless actually. consider me a fan.

Um, didnt quite get what it was about.
Uh, vampires maybe? Okay, but it seemed to have feeling anyway, and it rhymed well.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow... Impressive writing. Really intense. I like how you relayed your feelings to the audience without going into great detail explaining everything that happens, letting imagination take its course. Keep it up.
-Kate

Hey, thought id check your poems out as you left a comment on one of mine (thanks by the way), anyway this poem is amazing, i absolutely love it! ive added u to my favourites and i havent even got past your first poem, thats gotta be good. Anyway think we may have things in common, that poem brought up some feelings in me i cant even begin to write about, oh and my poems begin life as txts to! x keep up the good work ;0)