Hi...
well thats bits of different way to do one bout mates.. its good though! but ... is it bout a lad mate too i get the impretion.. anyway keep the good work up.
hanx

This is so sad, i hope that they realise what a strong and caring person you are, it sounds like you are too good for them anyway...hope you are doing okay talk soon xoxo

Hun... i know i'm not there... but i miss you so much... i hope im not one of these "friends" you talk about... love you always... stay strong and take care,
love me xoxoxo

Wow -jaw drops- wow hun this is fantastic, very well written I dont know what to say the language and the way its written, its just wow breath taking I dont know what to say, you did a great job, lovedd itt, keep it up hun lubb you

I know exactly how you feel like seriously exactly. this really spoke to me i felt like you were writing it about me lol thats cool to know other people feel the same, great rhyming great form the last line i wasnt in love with just because i think the way you worded it made subside sound like you were using it wrong

My friends treat me that way too...and it sucks...but still I know there's some who will always be with me(but yet again...maybe not)...okey...
whatever...this poem is nice...and we should all treat our friends...the way we want them to treat us...just so you know...I'm your friend...eventhough we never seen each other...but I think this friendship is true...unlike some of it...

I know i probably desereve to be, but i hope i'm not one of the friends you are talking about cause i do care and luv you... ALWAYS :P