Write about how you are not yourself anymore! write about what changed you, I want to hear more.

Good poem.

Hey this is great, and im guessing will be excellent when you finish, i think you already inspire others and it is sooo good to hear that you are happier i think you should talk from the heart about what you feel about helping others and how u can relate to them, um well i dunno but im sure youll work it out looking forward to reading it xxx

Sorry cant think of one. Its good and hope u can finish it soon so i can read more of it. :) latez.

Write more !!
5/5
love
amy

Awesome poem, it shows me the brighter side to alot of things. this poem may have changed something in me. i know your strong. stay that way
much love
DDGB

Wicked poem! you rock. i'm adding you to my favs.

This is awesome, better then ever!!!! i think you are an angel and you already put a smile on my face and im sure there are many others that feel the same!! you are truely an inspiration talk soon k!!! take care xxx

Wow. Even better. It wasnt that confusing but all in all it was alot better. Hope to read more really soon and thanx for the comments on my poems and hope im on your favorites list.

Awesome love, me likie:)

Sweet, I liked the unselfish feeling that radiated towards the end of the poem, that was touching, and the words were strange, but still likeable.

Good Writing!
beth

I love this poem hun. fantastic.

My happiness is just an inch away,
Waiting for me to just reach out and grab.

i find that bit is very close to my heart.
thankyou for the comments you have left me, much appreciated.
and i promise one by one i will repay the favour, because i love your work.

mwahh, aylz

Love all your poems. Really good. And thanks alot for your comment on mine. xxx

That was real good, itwasnt a free flowin poem but it was still real good, 5/5

the words wer real desription n yeh...all i can say is it was real good

That was amazing you are truly talented!!!!

Wow! you just gave me the shivers! the feeling a poem brings to you can make you feel so happy! the poem showed a lot of growth and spirituality! and made me smile, and cry! you are an amazing writer! difinitely an inspiration!
thank you for the wonderful comment! i never though people actaully read my stuff! hahaha!
~mo

WHooo! im speachless very great i love it one of my favs !!!! your so talented!

So real and therfore so true. :)

I love your poem....actually it gets me deep down, keep up the good work!! and yea..will remember UK =P Rosie xXx

Beautiful and uplifting, well done hun, loved reading this poem 5/5