I like it :)

Hum, rather brusque. No messing around this one, just remember to look at the future, not just today.

Good Writing!
beth

I really like the title...lol...
Luv Sharni

I love the line `so fk forever let's jus take today` it's like there's some sense of hope when a situation seems so dim x

Heya hun, I have a poem like this[[not posted]] but yours is spo much better! I love the idea all together and the flow was great!
Well done, you rock! 5/5 from me of corse!!

-Lisa xxxxooooxxxx