The flow wasnt that good....you like to write sad poems? i like dark ones...and sad ones also...4/5

It goes well to a song I was listening to... >_< I re-read it and couldn't work out why I didn't like it... THEN I realised it's rhythm... Lol.
JJx

Wow!!! nice one ... keep it up.
:)
check some of ma poems if u had some free time.

Pretty good, not my usual style