Wow that is really good and it hits home. Im going through something like that only my g/f broke up with me b/c of her mom. Good luck and i hope you two get another chance

Aww i'm so sorry things didn't work out between you.stay strong. beutiful poem!

"The first time I met saw you I know it was love."

... i think you may of forgotten to take the word met or saw off...

Wow thats so good! you are an awesome writer

Ohhh, really good

Really liked this poem...touchy!!

Its a very good poem really
you are really a good writer.
sorry things didnt work out between you both.

I loved it! i think i can really relate to this one. keep up the excellent work.

Huni i loved this poem, it was realli reallii good! 5/5 im sorry u lost her, i feel the same way except my gf and i went 2 this party, she got drunk and so did i, she went off into another room with this guy and had sex, i wasi n the house, i was so in love with her and i still am i want to be with her, she left me saying she needed 2 sort out her head, i want to be with her and i want to die if i dont get 2 be with heR!! i luv her, thanks 4 ur comment sorry i just needed 2 vent...well if u w0nna talk im here! luv Maddy

Thats adorable! ^.^ she's lucky to be loved, heh, i gave u a 5... great poem, i'll check out some more of ur poems

I really like this one.. something we all must go thru.. keep it up 5/5

You commented on my poem and I have just had a look at yours...Its so sad when you love someone and cant have them anymore. My heart goes out to you because I feel exactly the same. It is so hard.