Very deep poem, I almost cried when I read it! your really good and you know what your doing. great poem I hope the rest of your work is just as good

Silver, once again, this is a truly amazing work of art. As always, you are able to manage the structure, diction and imagery so as to convey meaning in a deep way. This is also very emotive, and is evidence of your incredible talent. Indeed, I am impressed. Keep writing, and keep inspiring all of us to write more.

Very imaginative and intriguing...I enjoyed reading this piece

I LOVED this poem. I thought it was EXTREMELY well written and it was just beautiful. And I definetly (sp?) think the title is right, its very true and fits the poem very well. VERY well done.

Excellent.. i loved the rhymes you used and the rhythm was spot on.. i loved the imagery, totally original and so sensual.. your words are so deep, i really cant give you much in the way of suggestions.. the whole poem is easily relatable and practically reads itself.. you deserve more comments on your work than you receive.. ne way keep writing, im lovin it.. pZ

Now that's real poetry! Beautiful language, and great rhyme. You really are good at this!

Good Writing!
beth

I'm Not Really Into Love Poems, But This One Was Diffrent, I Liked The Way You Wrote This Poem, Your Wording Was Brilliant And Shined Through With Talent *I'm Empressed* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I loved this poem; its rhyme, language and rich imagery :D

Nicely done!!!

It's very inspiring and it requires a deeper look, you have to think and, somehow you have to put yourself in the persons shoes to know exactly how they felt, and what they are/were thinking. It was beautiful!!!

Loved this.
definate 5 from me!

Wow, I really loved this poem. it has great imagery and a nice rhythme to it. This is are beautifully done poem. Keep up the great work.

Ok this poem though sad has excellent meaning and you are a great writer! I hope you will post something new for me to read! Later

A poem full of emotion and easy to read, it just kept flowing.

Keep writing
Nici

Brilliant and inspiring poem! absoloutely wonderful, the use of words and the way the emotion is expressed is amazing! you have such a wonderful way of expressing feelings!
what talent!
keep writing, youre definately going onto my favourites list!
take care
xx xx xx

Touched my heart and pulled at some chords that I'd like to bury. Great job.

Wow.. this is absolutely amazing.. i reli lvoe ur words and how deep they run through the heart.. and i love ur rhyme, it never seems forced
my fav stanza was this one:

"Remembering being half of a whole
And the security that was known
Now looking to the looming future
It's seems that only one heart is home"

gr8 job.. i loved it
5/5 from me
take care
Nouna

Very touching, i love the words you use, this is a very original poem, great job