That was good. keep writing.
take care,
marjan

I think its amazing that u actually love someone for who they are, and not what they are, it is so hard to find a guy like you.

Aww thats so sweet babe luvs ya xxxxemxxxx

Aww..thats cute...5/5...good job

This was another very good poem! I really liked it. there were a few grammatical flaws I spotted, though:

"as night terns to day"
~ turns* instead of terns

"i will love you no mater what"
~ matter* instead of mater

Other than that, the poem was beatiful and you got your point and message out wonderfully! Good job!

~BJ~

You're poems are amazing! I love them! keep up the good work!
~deanna~

That is really good keep on writeing more

Aww tha so cute i like it