So full of emotion... it's a little choppy, but for some poems it seems to work, and it works in this poem. I dont think it could be any better with a steady beat, the uneven-ness makes it stand out to me. i really liked it. if you ever wanna chat, go ahead and pm me. stay strong.

check out some of mine if you get the chance.

.,jac,.

I really like this poem, I just feel some of the same emotion I have felt at a point in time. Very well captured

From the Sleeping Ugly