I really love how you wrote this poem with the song shes sings today on each stanza it really brings interest.
keep on smiling and keep your head up.
5/5 awesome job.

Really really good. keep writing. you have a great talent, use it. check mine if u have a chance.

Beutiful, in a sad way. what a wonderful way to put the words we have all tried to get out. and its not very cleche either. nice job.

Wow..
only word that can describe what i just read. that is true lyrical at its finest. if i were you, music is def. your calling. that or writing, cuz DAAANG that was good!! lol as sad as it seemed, i totally understand, and that perfectly described it. i love it and you better keep writing!